Comments on: So long ago. No time at all.

By: jguthmann

jguthmann — Wed, 23 Jan 2008 18:29:40 +0000

I’m not going to lie, I wish that I knew all of you guys on a personal level. Hell, I wish I went to college with all of you. More stories from JM Tohline…now!

By: DMcKenna

DMcKenna — Wed, 23 Jan 2008 07:50:46 +0000

After reading this, I wish I knew “JM Tohline” on a personal level as you say foxstar. This reading was like a fountain of wisdom, except a slightly more brooding version than what I am used to. Bravo, keep the stories coming.

By: msmithers84

msmithers84 — Wed, 23 Jan 2008 00:28:05 +0000

I agree with jguthmann….I think. Jordan you may have to re-read this one to me and explain.

By: jguthmann

jguthmann — Tue, 22 Jan 2008 18:58:25 +0000

two words…wow and wow. How can I express in simple words what this short story means to me? Excellent use of vernacular and imagery. I just went a big rubbery one.

By: foxstar

foxstar — Tue, 22 Jan 2008 18:45:42 +0000

I like the mild hick/humor that was used to create the characters, and the suspense of walking on ice. I enjoyed it!

It is great to finally see Tohline published; though it may only be small for now. I know Tohline on a personal level, he is a character himself. I cant imagine all of the stories he must have locked up in his mind. Looking forward to reading more from Tohline in the future.

By: JM Tohline

JM Tohline — Tue, 22 Jan 2008 04:15:28 +0000

Oooh, good story…

Faithful readers: Yeah, I’m the guy who wrote this story; check out my website if you get a chance (www.jmtohline.com).